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Oh luminous star that bathes at sea
Such a blaze of light... faint clarity
Thy flame does ember, thus remember
In light of darkness, I burn with thee
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Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner Edited Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
love the rhyming pattern here and that star is really bathing at sea : ' )
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
Thank you so very much. ^.^
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prettyflour Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This has been Featured in my journal!

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Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart 
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
What a wonderful surprise. :) Thank you so much. :heart: 
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givemeyourscars Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, your rhythm here is beautiful. Each word works with its counterpart, and the line by line is just smooth. Very smooth and excellent! Well done. :)

Mind if I ask what inspired you to write this?
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
Thank you very much! Hmm... my heart. :) I was having a very emotional day, and I was on the deck looking at the sun go down, and the words just poured out of me. I'm glad that you like this one. 
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givemeyourscars Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I understand that, it's often when our best writing just pours out from us in a way. :)
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner May 8, 2014
I think so too. :)
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Valkaneer Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Professional Writer
lovely.
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Thank you so much. I enjoyed yours as well. :) 
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